it would sound so much better if you added some drums.
Other than that, love it.
Thanks for the suggestion!
I'll try and set that up!
Reminds me a little of pirates of the carribean.
Would work well as a loop i feel.
Good song mate, look forward to more.
Maybe it would have been better as a loop, but I don't have any more patience to do that. Just to get to this version of the piece took way too long. But thanks for the review!
Comlicated to get my head around
Clashes here and there, but obviously purposefully placed.
Feels uincomfortable, while still being highly listenable and holding a steady beat.
Kidos for experiemnting.. i just don't know whether i could listen to this that much. A little busier in some places would be nice too.
the last minute was the part my friend was supposed to make so it was hard to make things perfect. but thanks for the review, if you tell me when the clashes are i can try and fix them ;)
Good voice choices
Strong, but not overly so.
Very upbeat, just a nice all round song.
Slightly weak ending, but the rest of the sogn is fantastic.
Thanks alot dude :)
Good but far too repetetive
exactly what the title syas, no other criticism really
loved the sectionm beginning at 1:25, just wish it came a bit sooner really as the song starts to drag by then.
Thanks! And yeah, a lot of the songs I make are a tad too long. I made a few with vocals in mind, but that never really came together.
love this song
recreated really well.
a little repetitive
but the actual melody and backign compliment each other well, a slightly quicker change to the middle eight would've been nice, but a solid song.
Respect for anyone
that actually manages to make a sogn on LSDJ
as a first try its good, but i feel it lacks any real power
experiement around with the instrument sounds a bit more so you can something a little more powerful as the final product, but shows definate promise.
hey thanks for the review, man :D
yeah i have been toying around with LSDJ a little more, trying to get the hang of it. The learning curve is pretty steep, and the controls are obviously funky, but I think once I get rolling i will be able to make some good stuff.
would work well as a chase piece, and alothugh i find the FL guitar sounds slightly irritating, the song is very good, i felt the guitar and piano parts could have complimented each other a bit better when they both played together, but other than that very good.
The guitar was a stress to use since the FL guitar just sounds messy and the piano cracks to much on my sound card... Im really not going to complain though since i find it fun to jam to
as far as five second songs go
its defiantely gotta be one of my favourites.
dont really know how to to criticise, it sets out and does exactly whats its meant to, and does it very well...
hahah not for long, check out the other 5sec submissions ;D
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