so its not great, its good you put the effort in.
the first thign you need to consider when doing something like this is to make the song and video sync a bit, changes in the song = changes in the flash. Something simple like that will make a big difference. The other thing is, although it's good you used characters and not sticks, they need more animation, especially in the mouths, it looks terribly forced when the mouths have only two states: open or closed, if not, at least sync the mouths with something thats being said, to make it a bit easier on the eye.
Anyway, its not a bad try, love the song, (DJ Gotcha i think, might be worth crediting him?) Kepp tryign and you'll get there sometime.
the news stories running along the bottom, meant i wasn't concentrating on both bits at once though. Still, very good, i thoroughly enjoyed that :)
not bad, BUT
THERE IS NO WAY TO DISTINGUISH WHICH PARTS OF THE ROCKS HE FELL INTO WERE THE INSIDE AND OUTSIDE.
sorry about the caps but cba to rewrite that.
apart from thats its an okay little stick film.
do you get anything special if you happen to score over 9000 on the keepy uppy? =)
nice flash btw : )
Needs a little more to it though. How about a little more time to watch the deaths, they happen so fast that you miss them a bit, try slow mo or something mayb, or just generally slow it down. Also maybe add more of a plot to it, to make it seem a little more interesting, maybe see the car go mad or something. Although i like megadeth a LOT, i think that particular song was a little slow for the speed of the animation... maybe try something i little faster (mabe not hevier if you think that would make people turn it off). Well hope that helped and good luck for your next flash.
even though i put a low score for everything..
I really likes it, and the animation was really smooth, the graphics need a little haelp though.
In the writing above you talk about the arfenhouse rpg? does this actually exist? if so whats the link for it? :D
i love it!!
Well, i have seen soo many long and boring but perfectly animated flashese taking up my time on the net. Finally i found something pointless and random enough to be good! Please make a new arfenhouse you know you wanna ;)
add sum decent sound and explain the story an this is on its way to being a good flash, nice try.
Its nice to see someone sumthin a bit different, i reli liked that thnx
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