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has a very 'sonic-esque' feel

Overall i thought it was good, would work better slightly shorter and as a loop i feel though.
And it was also anti-climatic at 0:43, overall very good, and i loved the first quick scalic run after that. Keep it up!

nintendork64 responds:

I tend not to be good at ending songs. I kinda wrapped this one up fast, I guess. Thanks.

fine for a short boss battle

or an entry theme maybe

not that much to it though, a little more development on the drum part etc might be nice, as well as a couple more layers. It depends whether this has an animation which it can go in or not really. keep working though, you obviously can make an atmospheric piece and set a mood very well!

i really like the melody

the song doeesn't seem to fit with it completely when all the parts come together though (0:26). Having a rethink of what you have happening underneath would benefit it in my eyes, but that may just be me. Keep up the work!
And to the guy below you shouldn't review/vote low if its not your kind of music and your going to vote low on those terms.

Bunnymajs responds:

Thanks for the Feedback, and i'll think about it and try some things out :D

nice

but the start sounds a bit random, it has some funny times where it changes chord and makes a clash.
After the guy speaks the timing is much better. Also it's slightly long and becomes repetitive. It's very good if it actually is your first try though. keep up the work. And think about adding in some harmonies for the melody. Good luck in the future, this sounded nice, you could make some real good stuff if you keep trying.

Bunnymajs responds:

Thanks, always apriciated when ppl take their time to speak their minds :)

about 2:00

the main lead voice sounds slightly out of tune.
I think this is probably much strogner than you give it credit for, but i know whats its like to have something in your head and just not be able to get it down.
And it's good fun to sit and try and recall the melodys, then enjoy listening to them, otherwise i feel its ever so slightly too long
And a strogner bass sound wouldn't go amiss.
Some lovely transitions in this, very smooth. Was generally good to hear, just missing the bits and pieces here and there, but overall i throughly enjoyed it. Thanks.

weak treansition

the transition about 30 seconds in didn't work too well, it felt like the song just suddenly lost all its power...
Otherwise a solid song in the making, we'll see how the full goes!

I liek the idea

it just really needs some polishing
Unless theyres gonna be lots more layers, the vocals need to sound perfect, the problem is, they do sound a bit iffy, and as all the concentration is on them, its hard to miss.
Love the idea, think it works well, the chanting just sounds a bit too 'shouty' rather than harmonised, which puts me off a bit.

But nice try, as i said, i love the idea and hope we can see more experimental stuff from you in the future!

Good

Though the '3 seconds' line is a bit cheesey, the song itself isn't half bad. The song sounds much nicer overall now.
It might sound nicer with a louder bass.
At about 1:26 it sounds liek it goes out of time... you might want to change that.
The soudn at ":18 is nice, a more relaxing break.
It's shapign into a nice song, though i'd be hesitant to call it finished.
All thats left for it now is a little tweaking, and finding something you can add to make it really stand out from the crowd, a melody, a really cool synth.
The chorus at 3:45 is very dischordant, change that please, it doesn't sound too good.
Also, i wouldn't class this as ambient either, its a bit too powerful.
Overall, i like, it's nearly there, just keep at it!

mmm i quite like this as well

looking forward to the longer finished piece.
And just a standard on the beat bass playing the root should sound lovely.
Make sure you get one that compliments the lovely feel this has already, so is not too strong or too weak. Keep it up mate!

thedude9 responds:

thanks!

hmmm

I felt this sound was trying to be calm or ambient but the synths were obtrusive, and the drums would work better as bongo for this feel.
If its not, it needs more development, a melody to go on top maybe? It has potential, but it feels too 'inbetween' these two styles for my liking, good try though.

hanorotu responds:

I will try to do what you suggested with the melody on top and the drums! Thanks for the positive review.

Please rate my songs, I'm new to dance music and some crit would be lovely. I'm also rubbish at naming them, so new name suggestions would be great. =)

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